A Poem by Adrienne
by Adriennethis place is a prison with invisable bars
the door shut tight and the doors locked closed.
the darkness fills this place with emptiness
and no light can be found at the end of the tunnel.
in this place there are no opinions except the one
if you disobey you dissapeer for a day .
This place fills my head with lies daily.
the half of it junk; useless info never to assist me.
In my bar-less jail cell I have inmates.
Most of them bullies who always win.
Lives built around the lies forced upon us,
brainwashed humans turned into robots.
In my place you are not aloud to leave
You must sit there and remain in your cell
Calm as if nothing wrong is going on
calm as if you arnt being driven insane
Told what to do, what to learn and what to think
They tell you what to wear and what is wrong
They tell you that they are right, without sharing their proof
In a place without snse, only contridictions I am dying.
In a place without trust the silence runs low
but the noise even lower
no one stand up for the prisoners
when will the tryanny end?
When will the thinkers crack?
tommarow today or yesterday
When will all this make sense
and when will the mighty fall?
Written by: Adrienne
10 June 2004
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| Posted by: Julia Fortner (jam DOT nagri AT hotmail DOT com ) 18 July 2010 | Comments: I love ur poem... it has so much meaning in it... i was sezrchin funny *i hate skl* poems but i saw this 1 and i was in shock. u hav done an AMAZING job!! |
| Posted by: nameless4993 13 April 2010 | Comments: Great poem, ignore the haters, their just jelious of some great piece of writing. |
| Posted by: Eady 21 March 2010 | Comments: to those who call it shit, gay emo etc. you see its stupid people like you thats also why we hate school to those who type rude and (for some of yall) uneccissary comments like its emo or whatever.yall are just some efin stereotypes. |
| Posted by: Montrayvis (Mondev DOT howie AT yahoo DOT com ) 9 March 2010 | Comments: I love it gooood JOB!! |
| Posted by: maggie jones (lee DOT anne AT comcast DOT net ) 2 February 2010 | Comments: just notice "an" education |
| Posted by: maggie jones (lee DOT anne AT comcast DOT net ) 2 February 2010 | Comments: I think the poem is well written with some valid points. However, without and education, would this person have been able to write a poem or spell words correctly. That didn't happen without an education. Agree or disagree? |
| Posted by: SubversiveCitizen 1 February 2010 | Comments: To everyone who's calling him a fag, or a shitty poet- why are you being so negative? There's come poetry that's supposed to be professional, which is done by professional poets, and then there's some that's simply as an output for stress and sadness. Adrienne felt like sharing her feelings so STFU. I've written "faggy" and "shitty" poetry too- not to call this poem shitty; it wasn't bad. |
| Posted by: Liam Makitosh (Liam20 AT live DOT co DOT uk ) 18 November 2009 | Comments: adrien you are a utter fanny!!!!!! your poem is a heap of shit go suck your mums dick and get a life ya arsehole!!!!!! |
| Posted by: Vitamen water 29 October 2009 | Comments: Fag.. |
| Posted by: Danielle 29 October 2009 | Comments: dude its not that serious yu must be a fuckin lame ass pirck if yu have some dam friends it might be fun!!!!!! |
