A Poem by Adrienne
by Adriennethis place is a prison with invisable bars
the door shut tight and the doors locked closed.
the darkness fills this place with emptiness
and no light can be found at the end of the tunnel.
in this place there are no opinions except the one
if you disobey you dissapeer for a day .
This place fills my head with lies daily.
the half of it junk; useless info never to assist me.
In my bar-less jail cell I have inmates.
Most of them bullies who always win.
Lives built around the lies forced upon us,
brainwashed humans turned into robots.
In my place you are not aloud to leave
You must sit there and remain in your cell
Calm as if nothing wrong is going on
calm as if you arnt being driven insane
Told what to do, what to learn and what to think
They tell you what to wear and what is wrong
They tell you that they are right, without sharing their proof
In a place without snse, only contridictions I am dying.
In a place without trust the silence runs low
but the noise even lower
no one stand up for the prisoners
when will the tryanny end?
When will the thinkers crack?
tommarow today or yesterday
When will all this make sense
and when will the mighty fall?
Written by: Adrienne
10 June 2004
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| Posted by: Shadow of Sorrow 14 May 2008 | Comments: This peom is amazing! It exatly how i fell at scool.(oh and who cares about ryming and speling) |
| Posted by: ACEofLONELYHEARTS  [website] 7 May 2008 | Comments: I love how almost all of the poems mention the word prison at least once. |
| Posted by: sad&forgotten 27 April 2008 | Comments: this is an awsome poem ryming only chains people to a couple meaninglesss words a poem with a ryme is just a bunch of words thrown together and get some people famouse and as for speling a lot of people make typos who gives a sh*t |
| Posted by: weeeeeenaa ! (idk AT yahoo DOT com ) 4 April 2008 | Comments: boosha? talk about dark poetry. |
| Posted by: unknown 6 March 2008 | Comments: i think that poem rocks it shows how she let her feelings out. |
| Posted by: ???????? (hdsfgkdf AT yahoo DOT com ) 20 February 2008 | Comments: kick ass man |
| Posted by: AshSnow 15 October 2007 | Comments: its pretty good, gives me a powerful image i dont think spelling matters much... as long as you get ur point across. rhyme doesnt define a poem, organization does. how u organize ur sentences, ur words. this person is really brave to post their work up here... And for all those people who posted sh*t about this poem... WRITE one urself, learn what is a poem, and have the courage to post it up here. THEN comment. |
| Posted by: logan zara (logan zara AT aol ) 19 September 2007 | Comments: this sh*t is sick |
| Posted by: Chris (christopherchiesa AT yahoo DOT com ) 27 August 2007 | Comments: Who cares if i doesn't spell, or rhyme thats all crap they teach you in school that really dosen't matter much, anyone who thinks a poem is bad just because it doesn't rhyme or is spelled correctly is a brainwashed fool, plus why would it be about a jail if this is an anti school website, I though it really showed the close connection between a jail and a school, sure jail is worse but there are still plenty of Similarity, some should give this to there L.A. or English teacher and see what they think |
| Posted by: A Series Of Tubes 19 August 2007 | Comments: Shut up you little whiners. Poems don't need to rhyme, and almost none of the words are misspelled. I think that this is a great poem. |
