Broken Opinions and Dreams
by Alisha!Kids of all ages, broken opinions and dreams
we'll be worse off than it possibly seems
we're inside a prison with constant rain
it's showering acid; it's melting my brain
our real thoughts are gone and we're forced to conform
this place is to brainwash, not to inform
they're about to destroy the minorities
they're being replaced with too many authorities
you may think I don't care, but I just don't want to know
I'm actually smart, but they label me "slow"
there's so much more interesting information
we are the leaders of the next generation
they don't understand that we're worth so much more
but they don't care; they're forced to ignore
I hope that someday, they'll realize their lie
and aknowledge our dreams before they just pass us by
Written by: Alisha!
1 October 2007
| Posted by: Patrick (dethmetallova AT gmail DOT com ) 30 April 2010 | Comments: I love your poem. Ironically I'm reading it at school in this conformist community. Bullshit I tell you! BULLSHIT |
| Posted by: Cateryna<3 (samurai_cat1315 AT yahoo DOT com ) 19 February 2010 | Comments: Your poem was amazing! So many truths. A well-written expression of how you feel. ^^ |
| Posted by: laim makintosh 18 November 2009 | Comments: i like men and big hairy cocks |
| Posted by: BIOSHOCK  [website] 2 March 2009 | Comments: Quite interesting but i have not intention of becoming a leader or a following leader. im still in school in year 10 and still have to deal with the dark sarcasm. |
| Posted by: Madison (aura DOT seer AT yahoo DOT com ) 31 August 2008 | Comments: that is so true we are the leaders and i wish they would incorperate our opions in their teachings, but one day we can change the system, we learn history as not to repeat it............. |
| Posted by: Curtis 1 March 2008 | Comments: Thats great A truly fantastic poem |
| Posted by: Samantha Dodson (samanthanicole_9075 AT yahoo DOT com ) 14 January 2008 | Comments: I love this poem I'm in the 11th and I want to finish but it's so hard |
| Posted by: XxEmGixX (maria_G_aw2d AT hotmail DOT com ) 5 December 2007 | Comments: omG! =O aweesomeee!!♥ |
| Posted by: kyle (kyle_chaudoir AT hotmail DOT com ) 29 November 2007 | Comments: that an awesome peom |
| Posted by: Sienna (aduff2002 AT yahoo DOT co DOT uk ) 1 November 2007 | Comments: I feel the same. That poem was beautiful! |
