Uneducated Nation
by roberterherYou're sitting in your office from 9 to 5
You've never felt so un-alive
Depressed and sad in your car
Happiness have never felt so far
You thought school would make you smart
but all they did was tear you apart
Forced you to follow the stupid rules
made all the kids brainwashed fools
It's an uneducated nation
built on lies and threats
school's not an education
it fills me with regrets
they say success is getting rich
But I want to make a switch
I only wanna follow my dreams
but I'm blocked by teacher-teams
They force me to learn what I don't need
history's not what what I wanna read
"I'm an adult and you're just a kid"
"What you want is all forbid"
It's an uneducated nation
built on lies and threats
school's not an education
it fills me with regrets
Written by: roberterher
1 October 2007
| Posted by: kaylz 5 February 2008 | Comments: i thought your poem was the best. who cares about the mistakes. |
| Posted by: xaverri 1 February 2008 | Comments: perfect |
| Posted by: roberterher 7 December 2007 | Comments: Thanks. Didn't notice the errors, I think "forbidden" is what I was looking for, but that didn't fit so my brain just went for "forbid" ;) |
| Posted by: Sienna 28 November 2007 | Comments: Wow... This poem is almost how I feel! Every line of this i agree with! |
| Posted by: thoughtmaker 26 November 2007 | Comments: good poem ;) two mistakes i saw history's not 'what what' I wanna read and the forbid line was kind of akward. otherwise i really liked it. had nice rhythm and rhyming. |











